Killat-e-khat-i-ulfat

Killat-e-khat-i-ulfat per na jao Ghalib,
Mehboob sharmeelay bhi tu hua kerte hain!

:) I said this once when a friend commented that i don't sms him very much. The shair is my own, of course, but i added Ghalib's name just to add the ta'asur (poetic effect) to it! Lolz.

Comments

SP said…
first i started smiling..than i started laughing..its beautiful and brilliant.......lolz...
Awais said…
Lolz... my own response while i was writing this shair was not dissimilar... first a smile, and then a laugh. :)
Anonymous said…
hmmm ita quite a nice "shair" but i think the "jawab" of this "jawab-e-shikwa" should be sth like this

"killat-e-khat-e-ulfat per kaise na jayein Ghalib?

Mehboob josheeley bhi to hoa kerte hein!"

wah kia baat hai,yeh to aik ache shair se acha shair ban gaya hai :)
Awais said…
Hahaha... buhat khoob! This surely is the most appropriate response. Well said. :)

Aur kitna acha hota agar aap apna naam bhi bata jatay? :)
@ish said…
its a nice one....wow if ghalib come back nd read it he wont mind tht u used his name hehee